[v1] doc: update release notes for 23.03
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Fix grammar, spelling and formatting of DPDK 23.03 release notes.
Signed-off-by: John McNamara <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
---
* Minor fixes/changes only.
doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst | 16 ++++++++++------
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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On 3/30/2023 5:09 PM, John McNamara wrote:
> Fix grammar, spelling and formatting of DPDK 23.03 release notes.
>
> Signed-off-by: John McNamara <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
> ---
>
> * Minor fixes/changes only.
>
>
> doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst | 16 ++++++++++------
> 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst
> index b93903447d..a31d34f5f5 100644
> --- a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst
> +++ b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst
> @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ New Features
> * **Added platform bus support.**
>
> A platform bus provides a way to use Linux platform devices which
> - are compatible with vfio-platform kernel driver.
> + are compatible with the do vfio-platform kernel driver.
Hi John,
Looks like there are a double spacing problem between "do" and
"vfio-platform", also I suppose "the vfio-platform" is sufficient.
Other than that,
Acked-by: Fan Zhang <fanzhang.oss@gmail.com>
30/03/2023 21:19, Zhang, Fan:
> On 3/30/2023 5:09 PM, John McNamara wrote:
> > Fix grammar, spelling and formatting of DPDK 23.03 release notes.
> >
> > Signed-off-by: John McNamara <john.mcnamara@intel.com>
> > ---
> >
> > * Minor fixes/changes only.
> >
> >
> > doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst | 16 ++++++++++------
> > 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst
> > index b93903447d..a31d34f5f5 100644
> > --- a/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst
> > +++ b/doc/guides/rel_notes/release_23_03.rst
> > @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ New Features
> > * **Added platform bus support.**
> >
> > A platform bus provides a way to use Linux platform devices which
> > - are compatible with vfio-platform kernel driver.
> > + are compatible with the do vfio-platform kernel driver.
>
> Hi John,
>
> Looks like there are a double spacing problem between "do" and
> "vfio-platform", also I suppose "the vfio-platform" is sufficient.
There is also an indent issue in another addition.
> Other than that,
>
> Acked-by: Fan Zhang <fanzhang.oss@gmail.com>
Applied with fixups, thanks.
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ New Features
* **Added platform bus support.**
A platform bus provides a way to use Linux platform devices which
- are compatible with vfio-platform kernel driver.
+ are compatible with the do vfio-platform kernel driver.
* **Added ARM support for power monitor in the power management library.**
@@ -80,6 +80,9 @@ New Features
* **Added Ethernet link speed for 400 Gb/s.**
+Added Ethernet link speed for 400 Gb/s since there are some devices already
+supporting that speed and it is well standardized in IEEE.
+
* **Added support for mapping a queue with an aggregated port.**
* Introduced new function ``rte_eth_dev_count_aggr_ports()``
@@ -88,6 +91,7 @@ New Features
to map a Tx queue with an aggregated port of the DPDK port.
* Added Rx affinity flow matching of an aggregated port.
+
* **Added flow matching of IPv6 routing extension.**
Added ``RTE_FLOW_ITEM_TYPE_IPV6_ROUTING_EXT``
@@ -113,7 +117,7 @@ New Features
* **Added cross-port indirect action in asynchronous flow API.**
- * Allowed to share indirect actions between ports by passing
+ * Enabled the ability to share indirect actions between ports by passing
the flag ``RTE_FLOW_PORT_FLAG_SHARE_INDIRECT`` to ``rte_flow_configure()``.
* Added ``host_port_id`` in ``rte_flow_port_attr`` structure
to reference the port hosting the shared objects.
@@ -215,14 +219,14 @@ New Features
* **Updated the eventdev reconfigure logic for service based adapters.**
- * eventdev reconfig logic is enhanced to increment the
+ * The eventdev reconfigure logic was enhanced to increment the
``rte_event_dev_config::nb_single_link_event_port_queues`` parameter
if event port config is of type ``RTE_EVENT_PORT_CFG_SINGLE_LINK``.
* With this change, the application no longer needs to account for the
``rte_event_dev_config::nb_single_link_event_port_queues`` parameter
required for eth_rx, eth_tx, crypto and timer eventdev adapters.
-* **Added pcap trace support in graph library.**
+* **Added PCAP trace support in graph library.**
* Added support to capture packets at each graph node with packet metadata and
node name.
@@ -263,8 +267,8 @@ API Changes
* The telemetry command ``/eal/heap_info`` is fixed to print ``Heap_id``.
-* The experimental function ``rte_pcapng_copy`` was updated to support comment
- section in enhanced packet block in the pcapng library.
+* The experimental function ``rte_pcapng_copy`` was updated to support a comment
+ section in enhanced packet block in the PcapNG library.
* The experimental structures ``struct rte_graph_param``, ``struct rte_graph``
and ``struct graph`` were updated to support pcap trace in the graph library.